Book Review – A Better Place by Stephen Daisley

About the Book

Book cover of A Better Place by Stephen Daisley

The old people in the district would often say that Roy was not quite the same after he come back. There was a brother. A twin brother, Tony. Tony Mitchell, different boy but a good rugby player. Bit of a mental case, they said, but Roy would have none of it. He always stayed close to Tony when they were growing up.

They both went off to fight, must have been 1940. Only the one come back, though. Crete, they thought. We lost Tony over there.

Format: ebook (224 pages) Publisher: Text Publishing
Publication date: 4th July 2023 Genre: Historical Fiction

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My Review

A Better Place is one of the books on the longlist for The Walter Scott Prize for Historical Fiction 2024. It’s a book I would probably never have come across were it not for its inclusion on the longlist. (You can find a full list of the longlisted books here.)

In the author’s hands, war is a machine that consumes human beings. ‘Screaming. Explosions. The spraying of sand and dust. Charging soldiers being shot to bits.’ The scenes on the battlefield are brutal, graphic and harrowing but they also feel absolutely authentic. And the horrors aren’t just confined to the combatants but to civilians as well. Many of the male characters’ behaviour is challenging, especially that of Roy’s comrade, Manny Jones. But there are also moments of unexpected tenderness and self-sacrifice.

Before reading this book I knew very little about the involvement of troops from New Zealand in World War 2. One of the things that struck me was the very particular bond of comradeship that existed between soldiers hailing from the same regions of New Zealand.

Roy is plagued by guilt at what he believes was his failure to save Tony despite the fact that, being brothers, they should not have been assigned to a position so near to the enemy. He’s sure that Tony would never have left him behind had the positions been reversed.

It’s difficult to say much more about how the story unfolds without giving too much away. What I can say is the reader always knows more about Tony’s fate than Roy does. This allows the author to take the reader beyond the battlefields of Crete, North Africa and Sicily to Silesia where there are experiences just as gruelling and cruel.

When Roy returns home to New Zealand’s North Island after the war he adopts a solitary existence, farming a piece of land allocated to him by the government. It’s as if he doesn’t want to engage with a world that doesn’t have Tony in it. When Roy eventually discovers what happened to Tony, it confounds his expectations in more ways than one.

A Better Place is not an easy read because of its subject matter but the writing is wonderful. It definitely deserves its place on the Walter Scott Prize longlist.

In three words: Powerful, moving, visceral
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About the Author

Author Stephen Daisley

Stephen Daisley was born in 1955 and grew up in the North Island of New Zealand. He has worked on sheep and cattle stations, on oil and gas construction sites and as a truck driver, among many other jobs.

His first novel, Traitor , won the 2011 Prime Minister’s Literary Award for Fiction. Coming Rain won the Ockham Prize in 2015. Stephen lives in Western Australia. (Photo/bio: Publisher author page)

Book Review – Hungry Ghosts by Kevin Jared Hosein

About the Book

Book cover Hungry Ghosts by Kevin Jared Hosein

The music was still playing when Dalton Changoor vanished into thin air…

On a hill overlooking Bell Village sits the Changoor farm, where Dalton and Marlee Changoor live in luxury unrecognisable to those who reside in the farm’s shadow. Down below is the barrack, a ramshackle building of wood and tin, divided into rooms occupied by whole families. Among these families are the Saroops – Hans, Shweta, and their son, Krishna, who live hard lives of backbreaking work, grinding poverty and devotion to faith.

When Dalton Changoor goes missing and Marlee’s safety is compromised, farmhand Hans is lured by the promise of a handsome stipend to move to the farm as watchman. But as the mystery of Dalton’s disappearance unfolds their lives become hellishly entwined, and the small community altered forever.

Format: Hardback (352 pages) Publisher: Bloomsbury
Publication date: 16th February 2023 Genre: Historical Fiction

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My Review

As well as being a BBC2 Between the Covers book club pick and being longlisted for The Walter Scott Prize for Historical Fiction 2024, Hungry Ghosts is one of the books on the longlist for the Swansea University Dylan Thomas Prize 2024. The shortlist will be announced on Thursday 21st March 2024.

Hungry Ghosts has been described as ‘a mesmerising novel about violence, religion, family and class’ and as ‘biblical in scope and power’. I wouldn’t disagree with either of these although the comparison that came to my mind was a Shakespearean tragedy such is the story of cruelty, revenge, betrayal, hate and lust that unfolds.

The novel focuses on four main characters: Hansraj Saroop and his wife, Shweta; their son, Krishna; and Marlee, the wife of rich businessman Dalton Changoor whose disappearance remains an unresolved mystery for much of the book but is also the catalyst for a chain of events that will bring far-reaching consequences. Other characters, such as Krishna’s cousin, Tarik, and Lata, the daughter of one of the families who share the Saroop’s cramped living space, play important roles in the story. They are not just shadowy figures in the background but are vividly brought to life. Robinson, one of the other workers on the Changoor estate, was a character that particularly stuck in my mind. If there’s anything close to ‘a good man’ in the book, he’s a candidate.

As we learn, many of the characters have experienced violence and cruelty in their lives, often as children at the hands of their fathers. They carry the legacy of those experiences in their actions: sometimes perpetuating them, sometimes seeking to rise above them. Loss – of parents, of children – is a persistent backdrop to the characters’ lives. One loss in particular is a source of grief that Shweta lives with daily but which Hansraj seems unwilling or unable to acknowledge. It’s a ‘hungry ghost’ that feeds upon her every day.

Many of the characters seek to better themselves and to get more from life than what fate has dealt them so far, which in most cases is not very much. Shweta longs for a house of her own that she doesn’t have to share with other families, that offers more privacy than a flimsy partition and that doesn’t leak when it rains. Krishna, an intelligent young man, knows the local school cannot provide the education that will allow him to forge a life beyond the village. He resents the prejudice directed at his family and is frustrated at his father’s seeming acceptance of it. Marlee is one person who has made a new life for herself but it has come at a cost. There will be a cost to others as well.

The story may be bleak but the writing is anything but. You get the sense that every sentence has been thought about and lovingly crafted. The author has an obvious love of language, including some unfamiliar words (‘rufescent’ ‘thaumaturgy’ ‘eutrophic’ ) that had me reaching for the dictionary.

Hungry Ghosts has scenes that are harrowing and difficult to read but the sheer power of the narrative propels you through them. I can see why it has garnered so much praise.

My thanks Henrietta at Midas PR for inviting me to be part of the blog tour celebrating the books on the Swansea University Dylan Thomas Prize 2024 longlist and to Bloomsbury Publishing for my review copy.

Swansea University Dylan Thomas Prize

In three words: Intense, powerful, moving
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About the Author

Author Kevin Jared Hosein
Photo credit: Mark Lyndersay

Kevin Jared Hosein is a Caribbean novelist. He has also worked as a secondary school Biology teacher for over a decade. He was named overall winner of the Commonwealth Short Story Prize in 2018, and was the Caribbean regional winner in 2015. He has published two books: The Repenters and The Beast of Kukuyo. The latter received a CODE Burt Award for Caribbean Young Adult Literature, and both were longlisted for the International Dublin Literary Award. His writing, poetry, fiction and non-fiction have been published in numerous anthologies and outlets. He lives in Trinidad Tobago.

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