Book Review: A Pivotal Right (Shaking the Tree#2) by K. A. Servian

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I’m delighted to be hosting today’s stop on the blog tour for A Pivotal Right by K. A. ServianA Pivotal Right is the second book in the author’s ‘Shaking the Tree’ series and the sequel to A Moral Compass.  I read A Moral Compass last year and really enjoyed it so I was thrilled when Amy at Historical Fiction Virtual Book Tours contacted me about taking part in the tour for A Pivotal Right.  Read my review below.

You can see the other great book bloggers taking part on the tour page along with links to their reviews of the book, extracts and other content.  If you’re a US resident, the tour page is also where you can enter the giveaway for a chance to win one of 10 ecopies of The Moral Compass.  Please read the terms and conditions for the giveaway.


A Pivotal RightAbout the Book

Florence struggled for breath as she stared into the face of a ghost. “Jack?”

Twenty years after being forced apart Jack and Florence have been offered a second chance at love. But can they find their way back to each other through all the misunderstandings, guilt and pain?

And what of their daughter, Viola? Her plan to become a doctor is based on the belief she has inherited her gift her medicine from Emile, the man she believed was her father. How will she reconcile her future with the discovery that she is Jack’s child?

Format: Paperback, ebook (428 pp.)    Publisher: Sweetpea Publishing
Published: 15th August 2018         Genre: Historical Fiction, Romance

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My Review

Although A Pivotal Right can be read as a standalone, for maximum enjoyment I would recommend starting with the first book in the series, A Moral Compass, not least because the importance of the role of one character in the first book will only become clear to new readers some way through the second.  However, there is plenty of recapping of events in the first book for the new reader starting with A Pivotal Right.

In fact, readers starting the series with A Pivotal Right will find themselves in much the same position as Florence’s daughter, Viola; learning surprising things about her mother’s past in a series of unexpected, and at times shocking, revelations.  I found Viola an engaging character: independent-minded, ambitious, a little headstrong at times but displaying the same belief in equality and fairness as her principled mother (including in the ‘pivotal right’ of universal suffrage).

The book has some swift changes in location and timeline as events of the twenty years between A Moral Compass and A Pivotal Right are revealed.    At times, there is a sense of history repeating itself as Viola undergoes a traumatic experience that  mirrors her mother’s similar experience years before.  (The author certainly does like to create some really amoral characters.) As the events of the book unfold, many of the characters face moral choices between following their heart or fulfilling their responsibilities to others and between staying true to their principles or standing by promises made long ago.

One of the things that originally drew me to the first book in the series, A Moral Compass, was the New Zealand setting.  I did find myself wishing for a little more local colour, as the New Zealand that Florence and Viola experience in A Pivotal Right is predominantly ‘European’: taking tea with other ladies, leaving calling cards, attending church.   The indigenous population is largely absent.  I did enjoy the brief foray outside Auckland, Wellington and Christchurch when Viola and her companion, Matilda, travel to a remote sheep station.

A few potentially intriguing story lines were briefly introduced but not fully developed, such as Florence’s brother’s interracial marriage, the simmering conflict between the indigenous Maoris and European settlers and the campaign for women’s suffrage in New Zealand (although the latter two are covered in the author’s interesting historical notes at the end of the book).  Maybe the author will explore these in future books.

A Pivotal Right kept me thoroughly entertained with its gradual reveal of the events in the twenty years since the reader said goodbye to Florence and Jack at the end of the first book.  It’s a story of missed opportunities, misunderstandings and secrets but also of the possibility of second chances in life and love.  I was excited to see at the end of the book a reference to a third in the series, Slaves in Petticoats, billed as ‘coming soon’.

I received a review copy courtesy of the author and Historical Fiction Virtual Book Tours.

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K A ServianAbout the Author

As a life-long creative, Kathy gained qualifications in fashion design, applied design to fabric and jewellery making and enjoyed a twenty-year-plus career in the fashion and applied arts industries as a pattern maker, designer and owner of her own clothing and jewellery labels.

She then discovered a love of teaching and began passing on the skills accumulated over the years: design, pattern-making, sewing, Art Clay Silver, screen-printing and machine embroidery to name a few.

Creative writing started as a self-dare to see if she had the chops to write a manuscript. Writing quickly became an obsession and Kathy’s first novel, Peak Hill, which was developed from the original manuscript, was a finalist in the Romance Writers of New Zealand Pacific Hearts Full Manuscript contest in 2016.

Kathy now squeezes full-time study for an advanced diploma in creative writing in around working on her novels, knocking out the occasional short story, teaching part-time and being a wife and mother.

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Blog Tour/Book Review: Miss Marley by Vanessa Lafaye

As someone for whom no Christmas is complete without re-reading Charles Dickens’ A Christmas Carol (or watching one of the many TV adaptations), I was delighted to receive Joe Thomas’ invitation to join the blog tour for Miss Marley by Vanessa Lafaye.  Subtitled The Untold Story of Jacob Marley’s Sister,  it’s described as ‘a spellbinding Dickensian tale of ghosts, goodwill and hope – a perfect prequel to A Christmas Carol’.

Sadly, as many of you will be aware, Vanessa Lafaye passed away earlier this year before she was able to finish the book.  However, fellow author Rebecca Mascull stepped in to complete the task as a lasting tribute to her friend.


Miss MarleyAbout the Book

Orphans Clara and Jacob Marley live by their wits, scavenging for scraps in the poorest alleyways of London, in the shadow of the workhouse. Every night, Jake promises his little sister ‘tomorrow will be better’ and when the chance to escape poverty comes their way, he seizes it despite the terrible price.

And so Jacob Marley is set on a path that leads to his infamous partnership with Ebenezer Scrooge. As Jacob builds a fortress of wealth to keep the world out, only Clara can warn him of the hideous fate that awaits him if he refuses to let love and kindness into his heart…

Format: Hardback, ebook, audiobook (112 pp.)    Publisher: Harper Collins/HQ
Published: 1st November 2018      Genre: Historical Fiction

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My Review

In her author’s note, Vanessa Lafaye explains her intention in Miss Marley was to try to explain what the Jacob Marley the reader encounters in A Christmas Carol had done to deserve his ‘desperately severe punishment’.  The book gives the reader an insight into the development of Jacob’s character from caring boy, determined to provide for his sister and end their life of penury, to ruthless business man building ‘a fortress of money around the two of them’.

The atmosphere of Dickensian London is skilfully recreated and Miss Marley also pays homage to A Christmas Carol in its three part structure.  As someone very familiar with A Christmas Carol. it was fun to spot the references to the book the authors have sprinkled throughout Miss Marley.  For example, Jacob’s thoughts about Christmas and use of a word associated until now with his business partner, Ebenezer Scrooge.   Or the walk-on part at the start of parts one and two for a character reminiscent of one in A Christmas Carol.

The final part of Miss Marley draws strongly on the spirit of Dickens’ original and Scrooge’s encounters in A Christmas Carol, although what is revealed to Jacob Marley is definitely not ‘A Wonderful Life’.

One of the challenges an author faces when writing a prequel is that they cannot change what happens in the original story.  As most readers will know, A Christmas Carol starts with the death of Marley and his appearance in spirit form to try to ensure Scrooge does not take the same path as him.   Therefore, the reader of Miss Marley will finish the book knowing the possibility of redemption offered to Scrooge in A Christmas Carol is sadly not going to be available to Jacob Marley in his lifetime, despite the efforts of his sister.

Miss Marley is an engaging story that conjures up the atmosphere of Dickens’ original.  The back story to the book and how it came to be written makes it an especially emotional read.  It is to Rebecca Mascull’s credit that the transition from the sections written by Vanessa Lafaye to her own appears seamless to the reader. With its gorgeous cover, I’d like to suggest Miss Marley would make the perfect Christmas gift for someone special.

The phrase from the book that really stayed with me was ‘Tomorrow will be better’.  An inspiring thought from a gifted writer.

I received a review copy courtesy of publishers, HQ.

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Vanessa LafayeAbout Vanessa Lafaye

Vanessa Lafaye was born in Florida and studied in North Carolina.  She moved to the UK in 1999 (having been deported once).  Her debut Summertime was chosen for the Richard and Judy Book Club in 2015 and was shortlisted for the Historical Writers Award.  Vanessa passed away in February 2018 after a battle with cancer which she documented on her blog, Living While Dying.

About Rebecca Mascull

Rebecca Mascull is the author of three historical novels. She is currently hard at work on her next trilogy of historical fiction, with the first novel due for release in April 2019 to be published by Bonnier Zaffre as The Ironbridge Saga under the pen-name of Mollie Walton.

Rebecca’s first novel The Visitors (2014) tells the story of Adeliza Golding, a deaf-blind child living on her father’s hop farm in Victorian Kent. Her second novel Song of the Sea Maid (2015) is set in the 18th century and concerns an orphan girl who becomes a scientist and makes a remarkable discovery. Her third novel, The Wild Air(2017) is about a shy Edwardian girl who learns to fly and becomes a celebrated aviatrix but the shadow of war is looming.

Rebecca has previously worked in education, has a Masters in Writing and lives by the sea in the east of England.

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